Vasudeva finally helped me realized that my son is not used to this life style. He is used to wealth not poverty. I realized it but I don’t want to admit it. Vasudeva told me to ask the river for advice. I didn’t listen to him. For this reason my son ran away. He took our money and the boat. We quickly made a raft and I tried follow him all the way to the city. I was not able to find him and I ended up in what used to be Kamala’s garden. I remembered my past and how I met kamala. I got suicidal toughts and I chased them away by uttering OM. The monks in the garden saw me and gave me two bananas. Vasudeva caught up to me and I gave him one of my bananas to eat. I was deeply hurt but I knew that my son would be okay. Vasudeva and I went back to our hut and I went to bed early that day for I was in pain.
There should be a comma after "wealth" in the second sentence, after "but" in the third sentence, and after "for" in the sixth sentence. "Kamala" should be capitalized in the tenth sentence. "Thoughts" is misspelled in the eleventh sentence and there should be a comma after "day" in the last sentence. This posting is accurate and factual, there were only small grammatical and spelling errors.
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ReplyDeleteHas Siddhartha mentioned uttering OM before?
ReplyDeleteIs OM the very thing that he was running from when he left Nepal?
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ReplyDeleteThat son of his should've been raised better. After kamala's passing he's lucky he had someone who loved him as much as Sidhhartha did.
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