After fleeing into the forest, it took me a while to find a new town. But then I stumbled upon a new town which was just outside the forest. In the town, I had saw a girl over by the grove of trees whose name is Kamala. She was incredibly beautiful, but she didn’t take much notice of me.
What was the name of the town he fleed to? How long did the journey actually take? i would have included more information in this diary entry report.
ReplyDelete-Ryan Shaktah
How did Siddhartha know her name was Kamala? This section is not exactly clear on the story. I would suggest a rewrite.
ReplyDelete-Alex H